Critiques #3 - Outdoors

[Jensen Ackles]

I have to post in sections, my browser is being a bitch and keeps changing pages on my half way through

Ariel: This is definitely a side of you we haven't seen before! It's outside, yes, but I would've loved a shot of you interacting in nature. Judging what I'm given, I'd say this is lackluster in comparison to what you've been presenting us with. I'm glad you showed up, but I would've loved something a little more classy. An okay submission.

Jensen: Disappointed that you're very very late. You'll be penalized for that. But glad you submitted <3 This is cute but weird as well. I do like the outside and your body looks sexy. Nice but not spectacular.

Doctor: I'm not in the position to mouth off about being late this time. xD However, I think you made the same mistake Raven made last shoot. No interaction with your background in the slightest. In fact, your "outside" is blurred. That's a horrible decision considering the whole point of this shoot is "outside". I don't like the panty shot either. It feels like that's what you really want us to see and Jensen...ew. Don't tell her she looks sexy when she looks like she's in Middle School. It's creepy. >.<

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: I find this hilarious and stunning at the same time! I can see a few people being taken back by this shot but I'm actually loving it. A man in a dress is showing more modeling potential than some of these other girls! You definitely brought it this week all while connecting with your theme. My critique is that you need to be a little more lady-like if you're going to dress like one. Look at that hand. You're gripping that hat like a... LIKE YOU'RE NOT A LADY OKAY! Other than that very small note, excellent work this week!

Jensen: I remember when you asked to be Grell after Sesshomaru did so well and when you showed me the pictures I was like, wait, I thought you wanted to use a man lol Grell works it for sure dressed as a woman. The dress and setting are so vintage, you look great. I really am impressed!

Doctor: I love coming into this season already familiar with you, Grell. It makes watching you compete 10x more fun for me. xD Each time I see a successful shot from you (like this one), I can't help but imagine you doing so AS Grell. Voice & attitude. xD I love it. This shot is great. I have nothing bad to say. Just take in the advice Ariel gave you and I think you'll continue to do great things. ^.^

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: Oh. My. GOD!!!! Honestly didn't think I'd be seeing anything close to this but I'm so glad I am! You look absolutely stunning, darling. Loving all of the colors in the shot! You look so at piece in the wilderness with the animals all around you and this is perfection for an outdoors shot! You killed this!

Jensen: *dies* Everything I love would take forever to name and everything I hate would, well, wait, there is NOTHING I don't like lol This is *dies again*

Doctor:
I'm so pleasantly surprised at how well you've done with something so out of your element. I've nothing bad to say. The scene is gorgeous, the modelling is subtle and works, you look amazing and it just all works perfectly together I think. Brava!

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: Oh wow Ivy is bringing the sex to this round! I like this shot a lot but there's still a few things that are off-putting. The connection with nature is obviously there and you're giving a very modelesque post. However the face and underboob are ruining this shot for me. The ear is awkward and the angle you're throwing your face in makes it look a little elongated. The underboob is self-explanatory and kind of unappealing. Excellent shot however. Them butterflies are totez like "DAT ASS!"

Jensen: wow, wow, and wow. I love the lines of your body, your shape is fantastic. I love the way you are connecting with your setting. Your body is completely modelesque as is your pose. This reminds me of a Gisele Bundchen photo and that's a fucking good thing in my eyes.

Doctor: You have a VERY sexy portfolio, but in the future be sure to show us more than just sexy. We've plenty of rounds to go, but I wanted to be sure to give you a heads up kind of warning to look for in future photos. As for this one, I love you in this. You look amazing. I don't feel you connect enough with the "outside" though. You barely connect thanks to the plants near you, but the rest is literally just a blur. I'm in love with the subtle green in your eyes. <3

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: Lana... what is this? You improved so much last week and then went back to submitting screen caps? I know Lana material is hard to find, but that's an element of the game and I unfortunately have to critique what I'm presented with. This is a bust this week for me, but best of luck to you in the rankings. If you stay, I don't want to see another shot like this.

Jensen: Yea, Lana was probably not a good choice for the game. I've never seen a model struggle in this game or in Jacob's as much as you do and I took a quick peek at deviantart and yea, they just don't seem to be very fond of drawing Lana. This is not really good and I'm sure you know that.

Doctor: *shreds the photo* LOL So where's the real submission? Hm? Oh, this IS the real one? Well. Um. Awk...ward...

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: As you know, I wasn't the biggest fan of your submission last round, but I'm totally living for you this week! The shot is very elegant and giving me the Maleficent I want and expected to see. You can rule over my dark forest any day if you look like that, darling! Amazing submission and a great comeback in my eyes!

Jensen: I agree with everything Ariel said. Although, I'm not liking whatever they've done with your right cheek in drawing your face, but hey, not everyone is perfect 100% right? This is gorgeous and amazing and just exactly more of what I've been expecting from you <3

Doctor: The thing that grabs my attention most are those eyes. They're so hypnotizing in this photo. Everything works so beautifully together. You did an amazing job and I wish I knew what else to say that hasn't already been said. lol Fantastic work!

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: I actually like the variety from you! You thought outside the box and took a risk and it paid off for me, but there are also three other judges. I think you look stunning, but at the same like your pose is a little awkward. I'm also not living for the dress, but I'm also probably just jealous because I can't wear dresses. Stupid fin. A good submission, yet I'm still somehow left wanting more from you.

Jensen: I like variety as you know, and I like that you gave us a darker version of you. It's unique and appreciated. I'm not loving your face here though. I love the outfit and the dress, the pose is weird, but works with what you're going for. Agree with Ariel for sure.

Doctor: Hate to be THAT guy, but this will most definitely get bottom score for me. I love the overall photo, but this is not drawn in any sense, which is what this whole competition is about. Top Model for animated characters. That's a living person's photo and NOT what this competition is about (the sole exception being cosplay week). Jensen might be too soft-hearted to say "no", but I sure as hell am not. -.-

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: Rikku, I just want to hug you after seeing this. I absolutely love this shot from you. You are embodying the essence of the Final Fantasy series in the best of ways. This is such a beautiful shot and I refuse to give a negative critique on it. I would've like it a little bigger (that's what she said) but this is still excellent work! SO PROUD!

Bigger link you could've resized and used: (everyone really should click the link, the bigger version shows the beauty of the shot much more)
hdwallpapersyouneed.com/wallpaper/final_fantasy_rikku_x-2_hd-wallpaper-375213.jpg

For future shots, don't think small. Always right-click your image and select "Search Google for this image" to find other (sometimes bigger) links. Less is not more; MORE IS MORE

Jensen: oh yes!!! Thanks Ariel for including larger image. Remember darling, size matters. You look amazing here!! I really am impressed and glad to see you give us something we want. MORE!! I can already see so many differences, besides a background. I love the outfit and the shawl or blanket, it's pretty. I love how you're staring off to the side and giving a profile shot!! You look great, so proud loving this!!

Doctor: What program do you use to resize photos? Answer via PM please. The ONLY thing I dislike about this is the light in the upper middle of the photo. I feel it takes away the gorgeousness of this shot. Everything else is just splendid. Great job.

[Jensen Ackles]

Ariel: Well, space is outside I suppose. After the success you've been gaining in this competition, I was honestly expecting a little big more from you this round. This is a good shot, don't get be wrong, but some of the other girls definitely brought it in a much bigger way. Best of luck on your finals though!

Jensen: I'm not loving this but I'm not hating this. The outfit is just not flattering on you, but I love that you're not afraid to give us ugly and model through it. I love variety so you got me there as well.

Samus: I'm afraid that outfit is Samus' default outfit.

Ariel: I personally don't have a problem with the outfit. Zero-Suit Samus is sexy, don't get me wrong, but the face is what killed this shot for me with you.

Jensen: Oh, I thought the blue one was

Samus: Zero suit is the secondary outfit. What she wears underneath the armour.

Ariel: Jensen just loves titties too much. He doesn't let me wear anything but a clam shell bra in the judges' lounge

Doctor: Yeah, the face ruins this photo completely. You look so pissed and covered with hair that you lose all sense of modelling. I loved the risk you took with the "outside" being on some other planet. Very creative take. I only wish it had worked better for you. Chin up.


(included whole conversation because I love Ariel's titty comment lmfao)