Post by The Doctor on Mar 12, 2014 18:14:14 GMT -5
Doctor:
The more I look at this, the more I like it. The connection is subtle, but not too subtle. I personally like the angle, but I do feel there are some overlooked areas. First, we don't see either of your hands and because of this...your arms lose their form. They can trick the eye into thinking they're longer or more deformed than they actually are. Then there's the lip which another judge pointed out. It's not the scar. I personally love the scar. It seems you lost the upper lip altogether. It's not pleasing to the eye. Lastly, the guy has a strong presence. This is dangerous in a shot like this. I think you did good and I'm so glad you gave us more this week. Keep up the progress.
The more I look at this, the more I like it. The connection is subtle, but not too subtle. I personally like the angle, but I do feel there are some overlooked areas. First, we don't see either of your hands and because of this...your arms lose their form. They can trick the eye into thinking they're longer or more deformed than they actually are. Then there's the lip which another judge pointed out. It's not the scar. I personally love the scar. It seems you lost the upper lip altogether. It's not pleasing to the eye. Lastly, the guy has a strong presence. This is dangerous in a shot like this. I think you did good and I'm so glad you gave us more this week. Keep up the progress.
